Thursday 27 September 2018

Descriptive Writing


The light flickered green and I swung all my weight into the dark tube,
as I went round around the first corner I felt my chip filled stomach shift
and the pace picked up. I could hear my cousin screaming “ im coming”
and the sound of their lanky body splashing in the choppy water, echoed
down the never ending tunnel. My heart beat increased, as I was hurreled
left and right like i was aboard a rocky ship. I finally reached the end and
was greeted by a huge pool of gushing water. The waves were warm but for
some reason my body still got a shock when hugged by them. My eyes were
beginning to sting like I had splashed sprite in them. I leaped out of the
gushing water and felt my dripping body instantly start to shiver.